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Ok, the first commentary. Let's see...Everythings so slanted...I shoulda tried better with the ruler... Wow..look at that school...my attempt at drawing a building...nice. That girl in the bg of panel 3(the one saying baka) is sweet...maybe I should have her show up again...and why didn't I fill in that last bubble? Oh, yeh, and Siven is supposed to be taller than Shun...whoops...
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